New Claws on the Bear OOC

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New Claws on the Bear OOC

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@NCR I would like you to include more detail in your RP. Including a list of exactly what planes and ships you are building, and how many troops you are recruiting. I would also like your RP to be more detailed with regards to the recruitment process. Recruiting soldiers isn't like building nukes, and so requires more detail when writing the RP. Also, a successful moon landing is not going to translate into more people joining the army. It may translate to more people taking STEM programs in university, or more people being interested in space exploration, but it will not cause more people to join the military.
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Re: New Claws on the Bear OOC

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Hi!
If I understood correctly, I'll edit some of the post to:

1. specify the number of army recruits + type of crafts built
2. make the recruitment more meaty
3. remove the landing reference (to be clear, what I meant was that the landing increased patriotism and national pride, and that in turn helped with recruitment. But, since it is just flavour, I can remove it no problem).

As usual, let me know if there's anything missing or wrong.
Have a nice day :)
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Re: New Claws on the Bear OOC

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Yes, that is correct, though please keep the numbers reasonable with regards to population, economic output, etc. It's going to be more difficult to expand to include a larger force vs a smaller one.
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